Well, this is a rough outline for what I have for my essay so far. I need to make sure to finish adding to my essay as well as relating it to my community.
Introduction
Intro continued... somewhat
Example 1
Example 2
(Conclusion)
Monday, October 27, 2008
Essay Feedback
I found the concept of exchanging essays for a weekend to be a good idea because it allowed all of us to have someone take an extended look at our essay. I found my feedback helpful, and the points made fit in with what I already knew I had to improve in my essay, along with providing some new places to improve. Hopefully I can use this new perspective to improve the quality of my paper for my final draft.
Monday, October 6, 2008
Project Proposal
As I work on polishing my project proposal, sitting at a table in the Hillcrest study lounge, I realize that anyone who lives here could tell you what my research is attempting to discover. There are currently 5 laptops open, and right now 3 students are helping each other with chemistry while another two are doing physics, and the other 5 students are discussing political science professors. This is the perfect place to get work done, as long as you don't mind a tiny bit of noise. Back to English, but I just wanted to comment on how I viewed my topic in a personal sense.
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